Life is full of up’s and down, the hardest truth to accept is the fact that’s as we grow life become more and more complicated. Happiness purely depends on one’s conviction, contentment, and perseverance but there are many other challenges that are bound to arrive as we age.
Firstly, till the time we are kids, we tend to enjoy every comfort provided by parents, but as we grow the expectations increase and challenges surround us from all spheres. Moreover, life is not a cakewalk, whether rich or poor everyone is bound to face challenges. For example, when a child passes school, he is expected to take admission at a prestigious university, grab a good job, get married and have babies, etc. We wake up to a plethora of dilemmas, hence should always try to take out some time for ourselves and indulge in several social activities like yoga, swimming, meditation so that our mind and body get some time to relax.
Secondly, with time our health starts deteriorating, and various diseases affect our stamina and immunity. Moreover, due to stress and change in lifestyle, many youngsters are exposed to some deadly illnesses at a very early age. For example, during the covid 19-second outbreak most of the causalities were from the young age group. Another biggest problem of aging is that, as we grow our insurance expenditure increases exponentially and many middle-class families are not able to afford the yearly premium expenses, as a result during medical urgencies they are not able to get good medical treatment.
In conclusion, I would reiterate that life is a beautiful journey and we only live once, everyone should make a point to include healthy food in their diet, do regular exercises and try to save as much money as they can so that during an emergency they have enough funds for survival.
- It is more important to have a good family than to have friends Family can always compensate for absence of friendship To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- The older you get life becomes more difficult Discuss Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 84
- People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life What are these problems Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns 89
- Nowadays more and more movies and music are available on internet at free of cost Is this positive or negitive development Give the valid reasons 84
- In many countries today crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cy they have enough funds for survival.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91909385113 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74956758583 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621359223301 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.6281812921 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.181818182 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0962932715438 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368005450491 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382893729578 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610171181065 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229678521597 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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