It can't be denied family is life, and friendship is the backbone. A wonderful family is a blessing to which no one can compensate. Moreover, if you have a superb family it teaches you the difference between right and wrong which enables you to select the right friends. In this essay, I will discuss some of the significant factors of being blessed with wonderful people to grow up with.
Firstly, it is very vital to have a splendid family, a group of people with whom you can sit, spend time, eat, discuss and, learn. No matter a family is nuclear or joint, but the importance and significance it plays in one's life can't be replaced by friends. For example, it is often seen children who spend more with their family are able to do perform well in studies, extracurricular activities, and even professionally.
Additionally, parents or grandparents play an imperative role, and living with them overall affects one's psychological development.
Secondly, parents play a vital role and should not be taken for granted, as these people help us grow from scratch and be the torchbearer of our life and any time can fill the gap of friends if we are not able to get one. However, most of the time it is seen the girl's always considering their mother as their best friend, with whom they can share all their secrets and enjoy their outing. These days guardians are trying hard to be close to their children so that they can guide them better and hence they are adjusting and evolving with time. For example. these days it is seen, parents go for swimming, dance and, eat different cuisines with their kids. Parents are becoming broadminded and are able to embrace changes in an ever-evolving era.
To conclude, I would say no one can take place of our family instead our close people can fill the hidden gap, be our friends forever. We should learn to encourage and embrace every relationship and be friends with our family sibling or parents first, then we can prove ourselves to be a good friend to any colleague or classmate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72191011236 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64779488687 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4550774824 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.066666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215104302805 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759994964282 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532322485 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120001882395 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748512362254 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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