once children start school, teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social development than parents.
to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.
Learning is the fundamental necessity for growth and development and children are more receptive to a new experience and easily learn new thing from their parents and their teachers in school.In my opinion, both teachers and parents are important for child growth and development. As teachers play an inevitable role in students development by offering them conducive learning environment. On the other hand, parents plan a pivotal role in cultivation.
Nowadays, schools and teachers adopted different new techniques such as problem-solving, logical thinking and reasoning, it makes students smart leaner. These techniques are more effective and influential and increase intelligence level in children. Furthermore, involvment in practical work dramatically increased their strength in other traits of learning and also increase their intellectual level. For example, participating in educational activities with their peer group would have undeniable benefits such as teamwork, pressure handling and forming effective strategies. With this students become prepared for future challenges.
However, parents also have a pivotal role in child development and growth they learn a social skill from their parents. As most of the children mimicking their parent's habits and they act like their parents in certain circumstances and start doing the same in their practical lives. Moreover, children spend maximum time in the home and their parents help them in educating regarding social ethics.
In conclusion, the role of parents and teachers is indispensable for better development and growth of children. Both play important role in different stages of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77551020408 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04108751016 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5191012158 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.846153846 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229111133432 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793324912394 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479338837642 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136496080476 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418679344939 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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