Difference between countries become less evident each year because nowadays all over the world people share the same fashion, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channel. Do you think advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages.
Admittedly, the geographical distance between countries has shrunk at a level where the difference between various countries become less conspicuous and unrecognizable. Thanks to science and technology, with this people, share food habits, fashion, advert and living style. The merits of this trend over right the demerits of the later.
With the advancement in technology, everything is easily accessible and available, globalization brings all thing closer and has a great impact on world business. It uplifts the threshold of world trade market. Underdeveloped countries and developing nations now export their native products and materials to other countries to strengthen their economic status. Nowadays far-flung areas can import products and ideas from elsewhere, simultaneously and instantaneously. For example, with the help of internet people can share their success stories and also needed can get help, here youtube is worth mentioning as people upload their videos and get money based on their popularity. These things unite the people and countries, it ends up the international tension and consequential wars between different nations. A recent example of this is the friendship of North Korea and Soth Korea.
This trend may hamper the heterogenicity of identical countries, as custom and practice of different countries worse affected. To maintain the heterogenicity, may threaten the international brotherhood, and downregulate the trading. Universality between nations bring prosperity and peace in the world, For example, American countries share their custom and practices, it strengthens their relationship and uplifts economic status of both countries.
To conclude, people share their experiences, ideas, culture, and tradition, it unites them and the world become to have a single identity, people do not differentiate based on caste, creed, and region. It breeds the universality, in the international market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... Thanks to science and technology, with this people, share food habits, fashion, adv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80350877193 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19457450188 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59298245614 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1169926076 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.266666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215230001142 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656475433751 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462412993442 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136909230287 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469963204426 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.