Robert some argue it will assist human in invention and development while other said it has a negative effect. discuss both views and support them with your opinion.
Some people think technology improve people life, workload by enormous inventions and discoveries but on the other hand opponents disagree with this statement, they believe Roberts has a negative impact on human life and society.
With the advancement of technology, the scientist made new things on daily basis, which reduce the work pressure on human life. Robert is one of the great inventions of humans. Now Roberts used in each and every field, they assist humans in manufacturing industry where they carry heavy material from one place to other place and arrange in an organized way. Sophia is the good example of the new invention by humans, is a Robert with little power to understand the things. It will assist humans in different areas.
With the involvement of Robert in the industry, it enhances the savage of money, as less employment and also increase the productivity of the company, and also improve the economy of the company. But it also increases the unemployment as Roberts do all things for the company at free of cost. It directly influences the balance of the society, as companies stop hiring workers.
In conclusion, everything comes with both pros and cons. Technology provides both leisure as well as new challenges. sp humans should take advantages and find new ways of employment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 394, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...way. Sophia is the good example of the new invention by humans, is a Robert with little powe...
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Line 4, column 90, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... cons. Technology provides both leisure as well as new challenges. sp humans should take a...
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Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sp
...both leisure as well as new challenges. sp humans should take advantages and find ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05069124424 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72290573363 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3454752976 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233369494885 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811859993948 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521565583447 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125718455915 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579850524728 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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