One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think advantages of this development overweigh the disadvantages ?
It is indeed true that research in medical science at its peak and many research programs have been carried out to improve life expectancy of human. Proponents declare that it has many advantages while critics argue that it has many disadvantages. After a close scrutiny, I personally agree that advancement in Medicine science has many merits compared to its downfalls.
To begin with, one of the major disadvantage of this improvement in medical sector is increasing population. World population is increasing because of the reason that we have cure of many life taking disease for example Cancer, TB and Polio. Increasing population requires more resources to fulfill need of individual which at present we do not have, and that cause economical and social imbalance. In a report presented by New York University, Standard of Living decreased because of humongous population rise over the period in U.S.
Secondly, If average life span of people increase then we have more elderly people around us who can guide us, teach us by experiance and knowledge that they have. moreover, Economy of nation get benefitted. if nation have more skilled; productive and experianced citizen, all they can contribute their part of life to nation, that cause GDP growth which inturn helps to improve balance sheet of the country. In India where life expectancy is about 65 years, High compared to China who has 50 years of life expectancy, has more GDP growth compared to China.
In conclusion, considering positive and negative facets of this matter, it is apparent that advantages overweighs downfalls.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08527131783 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73248116885 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573643410853 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 258.0 20.2975951904 1271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1312.0 106.682146367 1230% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 258.0 20.7667163134 1242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 95.0 7.06120827912 1345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232009935798 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.232009935798 0.084324248473 275% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124647077059 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238979136802 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 131.5 13.0946893788 1004% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -198.85 50.2224549098 -396% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 105.1 11.3001002004 930% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.72 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.6 8.58950901804 240% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 105.2 10.1190380762 1040% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 10.7795591182 566% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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