Nowadays, medical facilities are growing with each passing day because of modern era. Therefore, life expectancy is increased, and people live longer life as against to past. Thus, I believe that it has some pros and cons and I will discuss my arguments in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, there are many benefits of imcreasing life expectancy but first and foremost is that old persons have appropriate experience about past times therefore, they give this knowledge to teenagers. Which will extremely beneficial for their personal growth, and older citizens always share their past experience that how they overcome their difficult situation. Apart from this, teenager can be gotten huge information as well as knowlegde by older people, and old people enjoy latter years of their lives because they spend their earlier years of lives on work so, they take a break from their hectic schedules in this age.
On the other side, there are various drawbacks of this. Firstly, population is increasing day by day therefore, many types of problems are also increased such as, land shortage and food shortage. In these days, all people do not have appropriate facilities such as basic needs and educational facilities. Secondly, if older people live with their family, then their family members will face numerous problems, and they do not make balance between family and their perfresional life. Moreover, they need to work for long hours to earn more money and they have to fulfill their family' dreams.
To conclude, it is lucid clear from the above showed information medical technology advancement. I think that this has both sides advantages along with disvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
..., and older citizens always share their past experience that how they overcome their difficult ...
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Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...de by older people, and old people enjoy latter years of their lives because they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, apart from, i think, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22509225092 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61428111756 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630996309963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6921025637 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.923076923 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165913739305 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659890683677 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707241521796 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113540149084 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324191039193 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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