One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages ?
Most people are born healthy as normal newborn, but some children are unfortunate like they have to suffer for some certain illness. That is why medical care is very important to be developed and improved so there will be many more lives that can be saved and also life expectancy can be increasing.
All people in this world really grateful to have improved medical care as it can be very helpful to others. Therefore, it has a lot of advantages. For example, the discovery of new medicine or vaccines that can cure severe diseases which can never be cured. Those medicines can help someone to live longer or recover completely from their illness. By improving the medical tools or equipments, it can be more convenient and effective for surgery or treatment to be faster and safer.
Despite all the great things from that, it can also be a hassle. If the medical care is not used well, it can harm others as they improved to advance version. It might develop some medicine that are way to stronger for people can consume or handle. Or maybe it also can turn very bad if they scientists utilize the medical care for inventing some virus or certain science thing that some will never imagine it.
Overall, the advantages of the development will never outweight the disadvantages as the benfits are more beneficial and helpful to people in this world. And maybe in the future, all the medical care can be way more advance than the recent version.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72834645669 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4728201976 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51968503937 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5660624497 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3846153846 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184858826741 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756746858787 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621861799482 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134614934319 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030007390575 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.