One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent years, the development of medicine can help people have longer life. However, this does not mean that you will have a happy life in old age. It is only desirable if you can look after yourself and be independent, otherwise, there can be disadvantages for your family.
One of the most common medical problems in the elderly is dementia. This influence not only their mental health but also their children. Even if the old people are still fit, they may not be able to look after themselves. They may have to live with their children or be cared for in the home. Although medical treatment is keeping the elderly alive, it comes with expensive costs, which can make elderly people become a burden.
On the other side, not all old people become ill. Those, who care for their health based on the development in medicine from when they were young until they get old, can enjoy their happy life. They have time to do a range of activities that they could not do when they were at work. Some elderly people save money to help their children’s life easier. They can look after their grandchildren, which is a great benefit for working parents.
In conclusion, I am convinced that we should aim to improve medical care to keep people healthy as long as possible so that they can enjoy their old age. A longer life is obviously advantageous but no one can live longer if they are disadvantages for their family and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63529411765 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43806794761 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4600275482 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22136864774 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838482081144 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597788442235 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155635292796 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581397164756 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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