One long distance of planes consumes more than a car and it can pollute environment more than cars. Therefore the unnecessary flight such as tourist travelling should be discouraged than limit the car use. Do you agree or disagree?
Air pollution is the biggest issues facing in today's world which can cause various diseases and can have severe damage to our health. The major contributors can be either airplanes and personal vehicles, which usage have drastically increased. To prevent this environmental damage, some people claims that non-essential flights such as travelling should be banned instead of limiting the vehicle usage. However, in my opinion this should not be banned because the toxic gas releasing from personal vehicle is more than that of airplanes.
By banning non-essential flights, the airplane usage would decline and the environment would no longer be damaged from releasing fuels. This gas consumption is more than that of personal cars, because the fuel tank for airplanes is about 100 times bigger than car's fuel tanks and as a result, it releases more toxic gases destroying the environment. Since airplane uses massive fuels to run its engine, its impact onto the environment also is severe. This damaged environment can affect people causing various diseases such as cold, fever, allergies, lung cancer and respiratory diseases.
However, the fuel consumed by airplanes is practically not much and releasing lesser toxic gases compared to those of vehicles despite its size of fuel tanks. In other words, the toxic gases released from personal vehicle are more than that of airplane because vehicles are used as a daily commute whereas flights are considered as occasional transportations. Furthermore, when the flights are operating, at least it carries more than 100 passengers at a time whereas cars can be operated by just one passenger. Therefore, by calculating fuel efficiency per passengers, the releasing of toxic gases from personal vehicles are more than that of flights. Therefore, this flight should not be banned.
In conclusion, air pollution is the major threat to recent world and which can affect human’s health seriously. However, there is no evidence that, air pollution has been harmed causing by airplane usages. Because vehicles are used for daily usages compared to flights, so it damages the environment more than that of flights. Therefore, airplane usage should not be limited.
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- “Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree? 73
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'so', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'at least', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in my opinion', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268542199488 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.153452685422 0.155533422707 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102301790281 0.0946595960268 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0537084398977 0.0501214627716 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0204603580563 0.0437548338989 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127877237852 0.122226691241 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0690537084399 0.0403226058552 171% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.783360093 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0153452685422 0.0326793684256 47% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.079283887468 0.0861772015684 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0306905370844 0.021408717616 143% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0102301790281 0.011925033212 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2211.0 1933.35771543 114% => OK
No of words: 348.0 316.048096192 110% => OK
Chars per words: 6.35344827586 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.422413793103 0.374742101984 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.327586206897 0.28420135186 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.224137931034 0.203846283523 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132183908046 0.137316102897 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.783360093 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491379310345 0.56093040696 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.0706487143 60.7387585426 84% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4705882353 20.7743622355 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7696008203 49.517814964 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.058823529 127.492653851 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7743622355 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.764705882353 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 53.2292089249 49.1944974215 108% => OK
Elegance: 2.04494382022 1.69124875643 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312902133573 0.332605444948 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102239538304 0.102741220458 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0718396822097 0.0668466124924 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.484223925412 0.534860350844 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121990986011 0.148594505496 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12289316233 0.134430193775 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648705593468 0.0742795772207 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.334225151092 0.324371583561 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00813832741565 0.0638462369009 13% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223737933571 0.228012699653 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385876744647 0.058150111329 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 0.0 5.90881763527 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.5751503006 349% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.