Online classes are getting more priority nowadays. It has become a trend as well to attract people. Whereas, traditional education is still preferred by many. This essay will discuss both opinions.
In the modern world, online education is getting more popular and has become a trend. In school, colleges, seminars, work, online education is given. Some schools do charge for these classes separately which are called as Smart Class. In colleges, video lessons are made online for students to watch them anytime. In work, trainings are made online as well. These are given as webinars. In my opinion, online education has made children to effortless. People get lazy to walk out for classes. It also gets difficult to ask questions as well as some classes take days to answer it. In online classes, people can get some benefits as well as they can access resources anytime, anywhere through a portal. For beginners, for instance, the regular online classes may irate eyes for which proper precautions should be taken.
On the other hand, traditional classes are still irreplaceable. In some places, this pattern is still followed. There are people who do not have access to the internet will find it very strenuous and not affordable. In slums, slate and chalks are still used. So it will be difficult to remove traditional classes from such region. It also gets easy to question the trainer and receive answer on the same time and doubts are cleared simultaneously. For example, some doubts can only be asked verbally and unlike online classes, one can take extra classes and doubts to the instructor anytime.
In conclusion, traditional and online educations are equally important. There are a bunch of positive and negative influences for both.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bunches'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15654952077 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6047568877 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543130990415 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.735073159 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.56 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.52 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236412696797 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740890610287 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630010218801 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163268266268 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438766368563 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.76 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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