Student should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable cloths Therefore all students have to wear school uniforms Do you agree or disagree with this statement

It is true that there are schools where uniforms are made compulsory. This also implies to some institutions or colleges as well. In my opinion, school uniforms should be mandatory for everyone. This essay will focus on benefits of uniforms in schools.

A good reason is that the uniforms in schools are made obligatory for the students to be in discipline which trains them to be in regulations and follow the rules. Discipline is a major practice of life which every individual should attain and this could be initiated from schools by teaching them. For example, there is no doubt that there are students who follow proper uniform leads to a discipline life by respecting others when they grow up.

Another good reason to consider is that the uniform instructs us that there should not be any discrimination in schools irrespective of gender, where different uniforms are allotted to girls and boys. School is a place where discrimination is prohibited and therefore, schools should teach this to students in their early age. It is should be made necessary for parents as well to teach their children to not prejudice others. For example, there are students who bias other students in terms of their clothing, which not only embarrasses other students but they also feel low esteemed and they looses their self confidence. Therefore, schools do try to maintain students discipline but it is also a responsibility of parents to teach their children.
Taking everything into consideration, school uniforms should be regulatory which educates children to respect their school, uniform and others as well and hence bigotry is removed if they are taught well.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
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Suggestion: loose
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, for example, no doubt, in my opinion, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10622710623 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79057899118 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487179487179 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1880985775 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192252304316 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857287235935 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576839973385 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120868145455 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06143734488 0.056905535591 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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