Online shopping is replacing the conventional shopping stores. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In recent years, online shopping has made our lives more convenient. Traditional shopping is being replaced by online one. I believe that this development has both benefits and drawbacks.
On the one hand, purchasing things from the internet is very easy and comfortable. People can buy products without going to stores, as a result, they can save their time and money to travel because products are delivered by companies. In addition, people may have a lot of choice to buy things while doing online shopping which they might not find some of them in convenient stores in a short time. By this I mean that individuals can purchase other countries' products in a simple way.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks of this trend. Firstly, the customer cannot try products before making a purchase. As an example, a girl cannot wear a dress to see if it fits her body or not. Secondly, they may be delivered in a poor quality than expected which people may not be paid back. In such kind of cases conventional shopping is comfortable.
In conclusion, although purchasing products from the internet is used by more people, nowadays, there are some advantages such as buying easy and saving time and disadvantages such as being purchased products not suitable and less reliable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a simple way" with adverb for "simple"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s can purchase other countries products in a simple way. On the other hand, there are some ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91743119266 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70394848869 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600917431193 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.7977048094 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4615384615 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184272464695 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772927493949 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089783331111 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123288942675 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114221028567 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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