Only reason to work hard is to earn money. To what extent you do agree or disagree ?
Whether the purpose of working hard is to receive income or not has been a controversial issue. In my opinion, there are other factors that can make job holders contribute more to workplaces.
Apart from financial rewards, other elements related to working environment and job prospects are of great importance. The first point in support of this view is that labor market has become significantly competitive in recent decades, which demands that workers work harder to keep their jobs. If working individuals are familiar with low working degree and neglect to change their working attitude, they stand a higher chance of losing their jobs to more passionate counterparts. More importantly, some individuals may choose to work harder in exchange for promotion opportunities. The more people work, the more likely that their effort is creditted by companies, they thereby being able to climb high in the career ladder. Finally, from firms' perspective, it is crucial that workforce is encouraged to dedicate more time and energy to their organisations. Recruiters nowadays try undertaking new approaches that motivate their workers including additional perks, allowances, and other benefits. Modern movement gives salary earners a sense of job satisfaction and makes them hard-working simultaneously. Thus, mechanisim behind hard work of employees these days stems mainly from the work market's shift and company's encouragement strategiess.
However, money is an intergral part to motivation of people at work. It is undeniable that given financial income earned from work, workers are able to pay their bills, feed their family and maintain their living standard. Without income from people's work, the needs may not be fulfilled. However, the number of people working only for financial rewards would not constitute majority of the workforce. Thus, career progression, other benefits, as well as commitment with companies are other reasons individuals work dilligently.
In sum, money plays an important role in people working attitudes. However, other components are also fundamental. I disagree with the view that persons working hard soly for money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, apart from, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54545454545 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92555316832 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.924111422 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3157894737 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196446391861 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680323906616 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564815810224 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135754412255 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496689923013 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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