Overpopulation is a major problem in many urban centres around the world. What problems does this cause? How can we solve the issue of overpopulation?
It is common knowledge that increasing amounts of individuals in capitals worldwide is a serious issue. The main impact of this dilemma is overcrowding. In this essay I will hi light the problems and suggest some possible solutions.
Overcrowded cities have a negative impact in pollution and jobs chances. First of all, pollution for both, air and water are extremely serious , because resources are more consumed and waste are more created. In addition, another factor Leeds to increase atmospheric pollution is increasing the greenhouse gases level by burning fossil fuel which. To site an example of this, the research done by Huddersfield University, gives information about rising global warming refers to increase consumption of carbon dioxide emissions by automobile. Another serious consequence of overpopulation is lack of jobs opportunities. Mover ( emigrants) from various rural areas are accepting work in a very poor conditions and they have shown flexibility and they tolerate working for long hours without having a rest. Unfortunately, they work with a minimum wages in order to pay daily life experiences. According to the Guardian’s newspaper, in 2018,75% of job vacancies in London were fallen by migrants.
In terms of solution, I believe the government should be largely responsible. Firstly, it is vital that provides essential needs for all rural places. For example, adequate funding on educations and health services must be done. That is because, offering a suitable and satisfy lifestyle would encourage people to settle in the area of origin. Secondly, local individuals with help of the council could play a major role for addressing those troubles. Opening small projects and companies will help to occupy young people and give them a vast amount of benefits and provide development for everyone.
To conclude, it is clear that the problems caused by overpopulation in urban area are very serious. Unless, if governments and individuals collaborate and share a collective responsibility, then it may become possible to offer some solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49378881988 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08307840115 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649068322981 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1540832942 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1052631579 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0895161828244 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300387537544 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646657933724 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715058223592 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573858502681 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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