Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money so computer should replace them. However, others do not agree . Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
While one group of people believe that, traditional libraries should be replaced by electronic one that it overkills government finance and resources, others think that it is important to keep it. In this essay I will examine both sides of this argument and provide my overall opinion.
On one hand, one of the main reasons why libraries should be changed by computer and digital system is because electronic information could be easily accessible. Many people find difficulties when they are searching for a piece of information. However, these tasks can be eased by digitalized system. In addition, the operational cost of physical libraries. This is due to books, labours, and rent expenses. The recent research which is done by THE University of Manchester gives information about diminished of libraries budget help to increase the government income and allow authorities to allocate this amount regarding health and other important services.
LIBRARIES, ON THE OTHER hand, are considered to be a cultural centre. Many people from different background meet together and share their ideas and knowledge. The good environment for exchange information and activities could provide societies with talent and open-minded group of humans. Foe example Whithington library , making boor subjects more interesting , lively and thoughtful. Therefore, the cost of operating libraries Is nothing When it Looks to their various benefits.
In conclusion, although libraries transformation seems to a viable step for convenience and efficiency, I disagree with the total replacement of libraries because this will deprive people from a limitless cultural source for books, beneficial talks and activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70817120623 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02780011403 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630350194553 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8175642032 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.785714286 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175353935494 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490913682292 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402680548262 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107440253798 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484558667581 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.