Overpopulation in many urban cities around the world is the major problem. What are the causes of this? How can it be solved?
The main problem in most of the urban cities in the world is overpopulation. One of the causes of overpopulation might be different kinds of facilities and opportunities available in urban areas, as compared to rural areas which can be solved by providing various facilities in the rural area.
As there are employment opportunities, people are attracted to urban cities which leads to overpopulation. To overcome this problem, opportunities should be provided in the rural area so that they do not need to come to the urban cities in search of jobs. For example, if jobs are offered according to the people's qualifications then it encourages people to stay in rural areas.
Another reason may be the facilities that include education, health, transportation, etc. because of which people are moving to urban cities. In rural areas, the facilities should be provided as in urban areas. If it is done so, people will not have to suffer and the urban area will definitely be less populated. When people become sick, they die just due to lack of medicine and other health facilities; which is a good example of overpopulation in urban cities.
In conclusion, it can be said that overpopulation is due to different kinds of employment opportunities and facilities that are provided in urban cities. So, to solve these, the facilities and opportunities should be provided in rural areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ties should be provided in rural areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05240174672 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15802353393 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467248908297 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.283179651 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4166666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252486051891 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108300442354 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698672585845 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182055116099 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670144458819 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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