Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
The condition of being populated with excessively large numbers in urban areas has been capturing significant public attention in recent decades due to its numerous problems on social progress. This pattern is the responsibility of both governments and individuals to take steps to overcome these problems.
There are a number of problems caused by overpopulation. Firstly, this trend act as an incentive for unemployment rate growth, which could limit occupational prospects for many citizens. Therefore, since people have to rival for a job, they could commit a crime or unfair competition by hurting their competitors, leading to harm national development. Secondly, the world has to face with lack of necessities in many large cities because of overcrowding. As a result, individuals with poor conditions could not be exposed to good quality products, culminating in losing social balance.
In terms of solutions, it is vital that the official authorities should create more and more job opportunities for all its citizens and taking care of them whenever they could not find a job by setting occupational seeking support centers. Also, decreasing the prices for all products is a good idea to ensure everyone could approach to daily supplies with lower costs. Apart from governments, individuals should also equip knowledge for self to get jobs easier or start up new paths in the economic industry to create more occupations for citizens. They could also try to do handmade products not only for daily uses but also maybe for the commercial prospect of them in the future.
In conclusion, the problems caused by overpopulation in urban areas are very serious. However, if governments and individuals share a combination of responsibilities, then it may well become possible to solve these problems.
- Young people are now spending more and more time and money following fashion trends What is your opinion Is this a positive or negative development 84
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good member of the society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be healthy and have a balanced diet Others however believe that school is the best place to learn this Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 78
- Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems 84
- Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country s police force or military force while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, as to, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34965034965 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10545418012 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632867132867 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8568650368 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.692307692 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127017141691 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060736560493 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083636490646 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119083281173 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101117379436 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.