Owning a home is one of the most important decision that many people make
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Owning a home is one of the most important decision that many people make, especially in some countries. They consider that owning a home is much more important than renting one. In my opinion, I would prefer to own a home and in this essay, I am going to discuss this situation.
First of all, homeownership brings stability. People tend to stay longer in a home they bought which helps their works and their children's learning to be more stable. In contrast, renting a home means that people can move whenever they feel uncomfortable or even in the situation that the landlord decides to sell the property, they have to move to other places. Less dramatically, they could just bump up the rent to more than people can afford.
Second, owning a home makes people feel that they have a greater privacy. They can renovate their house to their liking whiles a benefit renter doesn't enjoy. There might be lots of stressors in life when people cannot decorate the renting house or being yourself in this place. In the era of working from home during COVID19, privacy is the most prior thing for many people.
Last but not least, buying a home brings owners lots of intangible benefits such as the pride of ownership and the sense of belonging to the community as well as tangible ones of tax deduction and equity. Mean whiles, people who rent a home always in the situation of paying the rent every month and the utility for their living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my opinion, I would prefer to own a home and in this essay, I am going to discuss...
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...to their liking whiles a benefit renter doesnt enjoy. There might be lots of stressors...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, while, in contrast, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66274509804 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38157737719 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9967723399 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4615384615 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392400827914 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152995322336 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.198121589681 0.0667982634062 297% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254729117703 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.192953650654 0.056905535591 339% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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