Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?
It is a burgeoning controversial issue among parents that, they often fulfilling all the needs and wishes what children ask for. However, in this essay explain the deleterious effects of such behaviour not only children but also parents every now and then.
A bad habit in children which is planted by the parents that extreme dependency and poor self esteem. In other words, make use of parental support in every aspects of life would lead to children become lazy and selfish to some extent. For instance, excessive shopping for toys and unwanted things which not relevant for particular age may attribute children mind in less value of money. Moreover, doing home works and get ride of household jobs for children may lead to more dependent to parents and failure to cope with a life without them. Like an example from my friend, that still he could not know to manage a house even one day alone in terms of kitchen accessories and little housing maintenance until the age of thirty plus.
Most difficult crisis in their future would be the failure in life, depression, and probably financial tragedy's in later life. Initially, such students may have dilemma in satisfying carrier and life expectancy by inability to solve stressful situation or unlikely to manage intellectually by themselves. Secondly, such contributing factors overcome mind and may addicted to depression or some psychological issues very often. Finally, people who could not control the money or does not know the exact worth of something would make severe crisis in financial level and may have dangerous behaviour in future. For instance, a sentenced person for robbery explain after the duration in jail confessed that he could not have any idea of money because my parents deal with it everything without mentioned anything to me how they fulfilled my wishes.
To sum up, although, accomplishing everything to the children is good in some aspects, which would be a detrimental effect on later life of them in terms of family, personal and financial level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...iour not only children but also parents every now and then. A bad habit in children which is p...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... level and may have dangerous behaviour in future. For instance, a sentenced person for r...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that he could not have any idea of money because my parents deal with it everythi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, for instance, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06231454006 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68348042524 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60237388724 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.7954525104 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.230769231 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279750539253 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923201888619 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987124698649 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171942087599 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874188332891 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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