Parents should take courses in parenting in order to improve the lives of their children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Parents, in order to offer better conditions for their offspring, should attend parenting courses as to successfully acquire parental skills and adopt appropriate teaching methods in nurturing children. I would concur with this notion for not only its educational but also social benefits.
For one thing, attending such courses provide opportunities for parents to be exposed to novel teaching methods as well as modern strategies to positively intervene in one’s growth. These courses are often based on general trends towards how kids are taught in the context of family and hence, conduct some invaluable experiences, combining into lessons that will teach the adults about the most reasonable approaches to the youth of different ages with various characteristics. Young parents who usually struggle to understand their children or who are in an attempt to stop domestic conflicts have adopted many measures but unable to alleviate the situation should take these courses as an assistant to establish a healthy relationship between them and their children, yet to avoid tension as much as possible. In this way, they would become a good partner and a more reliable person from the kids' perspectives as the familial bonds have been strengthened through applications of such lessons.
For another, the merits of parenting courses are prominent in a larger context, chief of which is that the society will benefit from having more well-educated individuals, given the good environment to thrive from parents that acknowledge the magnitude of educating their offspring and have adopted appropriate methods to exert one’s maximum potential. As a matter of fact, children who grow in such families will perceive the best conditions in terms of cognitive development and social behavior when parents are open-minded to stop using the traditional parenting skills from their forefathers. Hence, individuals with familial well-being will contribute to a solid society structure as a whole.
To conclude, I fervently believe that parenting courses are advantageous with regards to education and social betterment. Parents should utilize this as a channel to find the most reasonable measures in teaching their offspring.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, well, as to, as a matter of fact, as well as, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54252199413 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95382314363 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.1863952445 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.818181818 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254115145665 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102184111543 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878119478477 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180896503498 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264800044626 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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