Parents want to achieve balance between family and career but only a few manage to achieve it. What do you think is te reason? Discuss the possible solutions.
According to statement, parents are in favour to maintain equivalent in between family and employment. However, few of them are viable to manage this criteria due to plenty of reasons.Thus,there are numerous ways to overcome it.Couple of views are explained in forthcoming paragraphs.
It is worth considering that, in modern era, it is difficult to mange time without perplex. Thus, parents become keen to balance schedule in regards to love once and career life. Yet, only few of them are viable to do so. First and foremost reason is busy hectic schedule due to technological era. Because, due to advancement in innovations of technology, every business sector becomes proliferate with rapid speed wheater it is industrialisation or enterprenuership. Because of this, work load is also maximised for employees due to strict duties regards job. Thus, this results to disturbance in management of time for family and job. Furthermore, another major factor is proliferation of inflation. due to which, budget of basic necessities become incresed. Thus, individuals prefer to increase working hours and also promote business travel to foreign nations for handsome wages which results to imbalance time for family and career.
On contrast, there are also possible methods to overcome this issue. Firstly, there should be need to provide weekend holidays to all employement sections wheather they do private or government job. Because, via this notion, individuals become able to provide enough leisure time with family and peers which results to relief from stress and depressed schedule. Thus, they become besides from work and enjoy leisure time with love once. Moreover, another way is organisation of family programmes. Because of which, masses become able to provide equivalent balance to couple of family and profession.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that, although there are plethora of prominent reasons due to which this notion is happened. Yet, there are also favourable measures to overcome this issue which results to positive aspects for both family and employment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45679012346 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99047158263 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546296296296 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6696532263 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126416817766 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042751217463 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416029950534 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792295274661 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276331843509 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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