A few decades ago, people considered shopping as a weekly or daily household task. However, now it is recognized as a hobby for a great part of the public. I agree with the latter statement and believe that shopping is more advantageous as an activity which is done for pleasure.
On the one hand, shopping regarded as hobby can lead to unnecessary spending. When people are visiting from one shopping mall to another, they can be easily attracted by carefully designed advertisements. However, customers mostly know what they have to buy and do not waste money for unneeded items when they consider shopping as a routine task. Additionally, when people are preparing their shopping list based on the daily needs the process will become more time efficient.
On the other hand, hobbies are the regular activities that is done for the pleasure. Therefore, shopping as a hobby does not transform to a tedious process when customers spent a great deal of time in the supermarkets in order to select the perfect items which will satisfy all of their requirements. Moreover, people can go shopping after a long strenuous working day to relax and purchase their daily needs, resulting in killing 2 birds with 1 stone. Furthermore, shopping can enhance the family bonds when it is done as a family hobby.
To conclude, shopping can be less time consuming and safe from purchasing unnecessary items when people regard it as a duty. However, it is more satisfying and relaxing as a hobby along with being a joyful acitivity for families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... being a joyful acitivity for families.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92277992278 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78230271356 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544401544402 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0010899875 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0769230769 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176276659641 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069818599641 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379062534901 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115562593936 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364609021012 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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