In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby.
To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
Some decades ago, people would categorize shopping to household chores. Nowadays,however, this activity plays a role of a hobby. In my opinion,this trend is rather positive.
First of all, people can increase the economy of their region while shopping.This is because they accelerate turnover of merchandises , which enriches manufacturers and store owners. Simultaneously, these businessmen contribute to the exchequer and authorities can use these monetary resources to ameliorate social facilities. For instance, our government finances projects dedicated to constructing parks and roads.Therefore, the more products are purchased, the more developed the region can become.
Secondly, certain people tend to receive personal fulfillment from this time passing. This means that shopping can serve as an entertainment , by doing which not only do people enjoy the time, but they can also cheer up themselves. A simple example can be my sister, whose longing for shopping always makes her happy when it comes to it.
Finally, shopping may help to reduces stress exposure. These days, majority suffers from stress-related issues cause by different factors such as traffic congestion. For example, it is a commonplace for my family to decompress by visiting stores once in a week.
To conclude, shopping is now considered as a hobby with numerous advantages following it . While it can contribute to an economic growth and satisfy people, it can also decrease the level of stress. In my opinion, I completely agree that this trend positively reflects on the welfare of the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50205761317 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20007528912 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683127572016 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4515622552 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132007852609 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459454696507 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437627148698 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763664316807 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051860139244 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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