In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Many young people decide to study beyond their national borders instead of studying in their countries. In my opinion, there are both benefits and drawbacks when students study in foreign lands.
On the one hand, studying in other countries can bring several advantages for students. Firstly, qualifications gained abroad can open the door to better job opportunities. Students have a chance to study in top-tier institutions where can offer better courses with a lot of experts. As a result, they will have a competitive profile in comparison with others in order to seek a good job after graduating from a prestigious university. Secondly, because students living far away from their family need to solve various problems without supporting from their parents, they can become more independent.
On the other hand, in spite of having several major advantages, there still have some disadvantages when student live beyond their national borders. Firstly of all, living alone in unfamiliar culture can cause lots of negative emotions such as homesickness. That can become one of the reasons which make students fall behind their studies and drop out of college. Moreover, if international students living in developing countries want to study in developed countries, their family will suffer a financial pressure. In fact, the standard of living in developed countries is higher than developing countries and fee international students have to pay to the universities is pretty high, compared to local students, hence the cost is really a big problem which students have to face in foreign countries.
In conclusion, studying abroad have not only positive effects but also harmful impacts on students, thus young people should be careful to think before choosing in study abroad.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or to better job opportunities. Students have a chance to study in top-tier insti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, thus, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34519572954 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83441624982 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597864768683 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7973685914 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.538461538 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31765952269 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110776062823 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482828764128 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190141701794 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240263083033 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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