People in this 21st century enjoying better life quality compared people who lived in the previous centuries.
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In this 21st century, the lives of people are very easy due to technology - it has been booming by leaps and bounds in all fields. In socity, individuals have been living better quality of life vis-a-vis the people who lived in the past.I largely agree with this statement.
To embark, people Are living their life with good quality and enjoying very much owing to technical gizmos: Mobile Phones, computers, tablets and television-it provides audio and video both type of facilities.At the time, all individuals have television at their home, when they are alon and getting borred at that time they spend time and enjoy a lot by watching movies also using social media: instagram, WhatsApp, Facebook and many more in their mobile phone.For an example,they can chat with their friends and relatives; watching some kind of vedio.If anyone wants to read, it is possible throw the some kind of applications: amazon kindle and play Store.
Moreover, nowadays, pivotal role has been being played by technology in education field: the modusoperandi of teaching has improved by smart class,on account of this technology, pupils learn; understand and memories easily.In addition younger people try to mimic bollywood actors.For an instance, youth copy the life style of stars by wear fashionable clothes, join gym to keep healthy and physically fit also watching films of their favourite actor and enjoy that movement.
However, in the past, people spent their most time with family but in the present, individuals spend most of the time with technical gadgets, it effects upon the family bonding.
In a concluding note, technology makes the lives of people easier than the past and improve the quality of life.So, I agree with this statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42592592593 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92046780989 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607407407407 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 203.376224984 49.4020404114 412% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 244.166666667 106.682146367 229% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.0 20.7667163134 217% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213944865009 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137815893734 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861839777034 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13772120404 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976134729637 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 13.0946893788 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.34 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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