People aim to achieve the balance between their work and lives. But few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problems and how to overcome it?
Nowadays, there is a growing awareness that a great many employees find it hard to strike a proper balance between career and life. There are several causes of this tendency, and some solutions could be proposed to tackle the tense relationship between career development and private life.
The potential reasons for the imbalance between career and personal life are manifold. Firstly, since a significant number of people think that working is the best way to struggle for professional achievements, high financial gains and social recognition, they have to exert themselves extremely hard to fulfill their rosy dreams. Therefore, the more time they spend on career, the less time they can allocate to other activities such as family life, health management and personal hobbies. Secondly, excessive workload and fierce competition make people have to fully commit themselves to their jobs. For example, a new employee is sure to be eliminated out of the rat race given the cutthroat competition if he or she slackens efforts at self-improvement.
Considering the conflict between career and life, it is the high time that we adopted effective measures. First, because working hardly is to create and enjoy wonderful life, people should clearly know that success in career will never be the sole aim of life and bear in mind that family life tops all. As a result, they should never bring unfinished tasks or assignments to home. Additionally, it should be imperative for the relevant companies to reduce the heavy workload and create healthy work environments. This leads to a reasonable mode of work not only brings happiness to the workers but also enhances work efficiency. Also, efforts should be made by everyone to change their opinion towards career.
In conclusion, it is not easy to keep an appropriate balance between career and life at times due to some reasons, however this problem can be solved by effective solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y is to create and enjoy wonderful life, people should clearly know that success ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18152866242 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81338560193 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6850352849 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.214285714 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137988950068 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482543910071 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330485838915 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853306546587 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00848572236735 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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