Some people think that the development of technology has made our life more complex, and the solution is to live a simpler life without that technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that new technologies and devices have had revolutionary influences on all aspects of human life, so the use of technology should be inhibited to reduce the complexity of daily life. While it is true that modern technology affects people to some extent, I believe that excluding technology is not a good option.
To begin with, there are several inconvenient impacts of technology in modern society. Firstly, since most of the inventions such as thermal electricity, car, airplane produce a significant figure for carbon dioxide which is main cause of global warming, the rapid development of technology causes some negative environmental problems which destroys the earth’s ecologic balance. Secondly, because modern technologies facilitate some manual work which is quite arduous and difficult to human being, most of the areas tend to use advanced technologies as a substitute for human. This leads to redundancies and vanishing of traditional handicrafts such as pottery and dyeing.
However, I agree that rejecting technology is not a good solution to have simpler life. First, as high-tech equipment have some complex functions that is beyond human capabilities, technology plays a crucial role in people’s survival. For example, CT scan, MRI and ultrasound help doctors detect and cure serious diseases. Additionally, development in technology relieve people of daily routine to save a great deal of spare time to enjoy themselves and perform more important purposes instead of doing the chores such as baking several food items, washing clothes and sweeping floors. Without the help of modern technology, people might to struggle with high pressure from hectic schedule.
In conclusion, while technology makes people more involved in their life, I believe that it plays an indispensable role for them to feel comfortable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52097902098 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01713406248 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6526583608 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.583333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289822817843 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103242768843 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778599743336 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17699086358 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725766962567 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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