Some people believe a high salary is the most important factor when choosing a job. Others believe that a good working environment is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A significant number of people agree that the finance is most important element in their job selection, while others think good environment is more important. While there are some benefits of high salary, I would argue that it is better for people who choose a job because of good working environment.
On the one hand, choosing work based on high wages has several advantages. First, due to the rapid increas of all product price, people who have a well-paid job pay for all basic living needs such as accommodation fees, food prices more easily. As a result, they can support whole family with better life quality in terms of meeting their living needs both physically and mentally. If they do not have high salary, they might find it difficult to balance household expenditures every month difficulty and face with shortages in many basic demand. Additionally, they can probably do more enjoyable things in free times with significant amount of salary such as buying some luxury goods and travelling foreign countries, which leads to the raise of their stratification in society. If they choose a job which has not high salary, they can not have enough money to do what they dream.
On the other hand, I believe that it is beneficial for people who select good working environment. Firstly, because of the need for teamwork in many companies, personal relationships and the atmosphere in workplace are extremely important to achieve highest efficiency in work. For example, having a good manager and friendly colleagues helping people to discuss and conclude any problems easily. If they choose a bad working environment, they might experience eight stressful hours a day in workplace. Secondly, because some jobs need creativity such as musicians and artists, a good working environment with wide space or beautiful scenery is essential for giving people motivation as well as new ideas to work better. This leads to the growth of employment efficiency and company sales.
In conclusion, while selecting a job with high salary is beneficial to some extent, I believe choosing a work with good environment is a better option.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'achieve the highest'.
Suggestion: achieve the highest
...in workplace are extremely important to achieve highest efficiency in work. For example, having...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07977207977 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77496972539 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532763532764 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.364449983 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.866666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324694249208 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113820009845 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895914422845 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238518365193 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779108893937 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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