People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption?
It is common in today’s society that the consumption of drink that is incredibly high in sugar is raising rapidly. While this trend can be explained by various causes, both the individual and the government could take steps to improve the situation.
Heavy marketing is believed to be the principal reason why more sugar-based drinks are consumed in these recent years. The soft-drink manufacturers promote their products at a target audience of young children and adolescents by attractive advertising campaigns and eye-catching adverts. These strategies encourage young people to form a habit of buying this drink since the youth are soon swayed by advertisements and got addicted to the high sugar content. This phenomenon may carry health risks, including life-threatening health problems such as diabetes, heart disease or certain type of cancer.
There are various steps that both parents and government could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, it is necessary to d reduce the intake of sweetened drinks at school, home, bus stations. Besides, youngsters should be taught about the importance of having a healthy lifestyle by having a balanced diet and taking up exercises. Secondly, to deal with the advertising, governments should introduce restriction or impose a ban on marketing which aim mainly at the youth, along with raising taxes on the sales of sugar-based products.
In conclusion, although the commercial advertising is the main cause for this phenomenon, a range of measures could be implemented to tackle this problem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld be implemented to tackle this problem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45041322314 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02385897594 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4645281059 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.909090909 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250710484545 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889089206945 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10013790892 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127115944565 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774507547923 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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