People are living longer after they retire. What are the problems? What can be done to solve these problems?
In the contemporary world, with the assistance and advancement in the medical major the life expectancy of people especially people who are over 60 or more has increased considerably. However, it is able to result in a plethora of risky repercussions, issues which can having a negative impact on society. This condition can lead to repercussions, which can be tackled by several solutions.
To begin with, this controversial issue can lead to a majority of inconvenient and complicated problems. First of all, after retirement, people can cause an economic burden which can affect both their household and the community because their ability to contribute to society is no longer significant. By contrast, their demand to use medical care services rises constantly which can influence the household and the national economy sharply because. In terms of the government, the government has to allocate a budget on distinctive facets activities such as building nursing homes, social welfare and pension policies which can be utilized in other categories instead. Taking Japan as a typical example for this, the rate of older people accounts for a large proportion overwhelms half of the population, so its economy is adversely impacted by the aged population the supreme authority of this country has to spend a huge amount of money on pension policies than other regions. Second, on account of the rise of retired people, the demand to construct more accommodation to meet the needs of the citizens is also on the rise, so the government has to carry out more territory exploitment which can cause some detrimental damage to the environment and the problem of deforestation increases significantly. For example, while exploiting, the engines of the machine can release a huge amount of black carbon dioxide into the atmosphere which can lead to global warming.
To tackle this complicated issue, some regulations should be enacted by the supreme authority to deal with it. Firstly, the government should create some strict laws for the laborers in order to prevent them from early retirement even though their health status is still stable. If they intentionally retire without any permission, they should be punished strictly because they can indirectly affect the economic development of the country and lead to several risky consequences. For example, many enterprises will lack employers and their productivity will no longer be well-qualified, so the revenue of the businesses can decline or the company will even be closed down. In addition, age inclusive occupation should be created to enable the seniors to contribute to the development of society. For instance, expert trainers who are rich in experience can be the supporters for the younger generation as, they will assist the youngster whenever they having any difficulty in their work during apprenticeship or working officially. Therefore, Since that the young will be motivated and they can increase their productivity considerably.
In short, several consequences such as economic burden or deforestation can be derived from people living longer. Instead of retiring early, people can choose to work continuously to contribute to the process of economic development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 7.85571142285 331% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 41.998997996 179% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2736.0 1615.20841683 169% => OK
No of words: 509.0 315.596192385 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37524557957 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06365021759 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 176.041082164 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528487229862 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 879.3 506.74238477 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3305747929 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7894736842 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26315789474 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231223173543 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746635093846 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460383905239 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149455239749 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033898451406 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 154.0 78.4519038076 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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