People are living longer. Some people think that it causes big problems. Others, however, think the aging population has many advantages for business, government and society in general. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people are convinced that the aging population can create many onerous problems while others think these population can bring many assets for the business, government as well as society. This essay sheds light on both viewpoints and gives my own opinion.
There are several reasons why many hold a belief that older people could bring many drawbacks in the life. Firstly, it strains on welfare state when budgets are stretched thin because the aging population drive up medical and pension payments. Secondly, the greying population leads to higher retirement age in the sense that they would be in the job market for a longer duration. If the world of work fails to create new jobs, the end results can be fewer occupations available to younger people.
On the contrary, others suggest that people live longer may offer the number of blessings to business, society as well as the government. From a business perspective, many companies capitalize on products and services with the sole objective to cater to their needs. More importantly, the aging population can be the economic powerhouse, which is no doubt a good thing for any government. For society, older people who have a wealth of skills and experiences. To be more specific, they are living museum of traditions and values, their skills and experiences could be implemented to survive values and traditions which always face the risk of being forgotten.
For both advantages and liabilities mentioned above, the ageing population carries with not only benefits but also the development of human in the earth.
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Please check mine as well…
Please check mine as well
Most of the people thinks that people having long life span can cause troubles to society. Nevertheless, senior citizens are beneficial to society, business and government. I would like to say here that having senior citizen in family is very benison for today’s generation. I will discuss my views below.
There are several reasons why many holds a belief that older people could bring many drawbacks in the life.Firstly, old generation people can not take care of themselves. They are dependent on their families,mostly if they have any illness such as Cardiac issues, Unable to walk, Respiratory issues, Arthritis. The person with such disorders need extra take care and having high medical expenses for these sickness. Sometimes, they become curse for other family members who are not ready to take these high expenses of older person. Secondly, Government has to spend lot of their funds for senior citizens .To illustrate this, such as Constructing old age homes, free food, Pension, free travel service, reservations in train and buses. If there are less number of people with old age ,government can use this money in other investment for country.
Although, greying population can cause troubles, they are blessings to our society. Having an older person in family is more than anything. They will give us unconditional love and support. They will bring us closer to our culture and rituals. In today’s time, young generation needs guidance from their grandparents to lead a right path in their life. Alongwith this, older person has high level of experience as they have experienced more hurdles in their life which make them to take right decisions at right time and take business, industry to another heights, such as CEO of any company, our politicians all are experienced person.
Though older generation are causing troubles they are suspicious to society and government. According to me we really need them in our family, country and society. They are advantageous to make us attach with our culture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this population' or 'these populations'?
Suggestion: this population; these populations
...any onerous problems while others think these population can bring many assets for the business,...
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Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'many holds'.
Suggestion: many holds
...inion. There are several reasons why many hold a belief that older people could bring ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, no doubt, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15503875969 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68628979737 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2513616315 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.833333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310978616127 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992040074706 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751051670853 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182792709948 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802465209484 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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