People can eat a wide variety of food of other regions. As a result they are eating a lot of foreign food instead of locally produced food. Do you think the advantages of eating foreign food are more than its harms?
It is true that people nowadays consume excessive amount of indigenous fruits due to availability. In my view, the disadvantages of this phenomenon are outweighed by its advantages.
On the one hand, it is obvious that there are various drawbacks. First of all, various exotic fruits can cause allergies, because the body is faced with a new product that needs to be digested. In other wards our digestive system are unable to digest certain products, hence, this kind of food intolerance can cause numerous health problems. For example, in Poland growing numbers of patients report symptoms of hypersensitivity after ingestion of tropical fruits as kaki, mango, fig and avocado. Moreover, exotic fruits can be more harmful compared to local products because it can damage DNA of individuals. To clarify, farmers use them in order to prevent, destroy, repel or lessen the damage of any pets, consequently, it also can be detrimental for human being. For instance, it was reported that acute poisoning with pesticides is a global public health problem and accounts for as many as 300,000 deaths worldwide every year.
On the flip side, we cannot deny the benefits of exotic products. Firstly, eating various foods will boost immune system and lower the risks of obtaining numerous diseases. Hence, a person's daily ration should include various food products containing proteins, fats and carbohydrates. In attrition, it was found that exotic products are especially rich in vitamins and minerals that can cure a lot of diseases. As an example, a double-blind, randomized, placebo-controlled trial found that goji berries may help people suffering from macular degeneration. Besides, a certain exotic products serve as an incentive to explore a new culture. When people like to eat the products of another country they begin to be interested in the culture of this country. For instance, when I was obsessed with sushi I became interested in Japanese culture.
In conclusion, despite some disadvantages of eating illocal fruits and vegetables, I believe that there are undeniable positive sides like new data about different culture and nutrition of this food which can treat diseases
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28735632184 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94083329388 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600574712644 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1604802049 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.222222222 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173067215929 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476827281053 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539430239343 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997571947327 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439435073529 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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