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People continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happens? How can crime be stopped.
Offenders are repeating the offence after punishment due to unemployment and poverty. In this essay, I will explain various reasons for the criminals commit crime and measures to prevent it.
People who are once confined, they will not get any job and due to society neglected by their family. So they will commit crime again. In the prison, they will get new criminal friends and joined together they would commit high crime. Bribing the law authorities and due to lack of strong punishment would make psychological stronger mindset of the criminals escape from the law suit. Some criminals are me...
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I will explain various reasons for the criminals commit crime and measures to prevent it.
I will explain various reasons for the criminals who commit crime and the measures to prevent it.
due to society neglected by their family
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Bribing the law authorities and due to lack of strong punishment would make psychological stronger mindset of the criminals escape from the law suit.
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providing education and job opportunities for the criminals which make them busy in their work and it would help to eliminate commit crime.
providing education and job opportunities for the criminals will make them busy in their work and it would help to eliminate commit crime.
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
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Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 250 350
No. of Characters: 1370 1500
No. of Different Words: 137 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.976 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.48 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.853 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 86 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.625 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.097 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.188 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.385 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.553 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.158 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5