People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
It is true that presidents who live in large cities have been suffered from plenty of issues in their daily life such as security, pollution, and living cost. Even though governments have started and done to plan the solutions, I do not concur with the idea of moving citizens to regional towns.
One of the main matters which city-dwellers face every day is traffic jams. Traffic jams often appear on peak hours, when mass people go to work and study. In crowded places like this, traffic congestion deeply affects participants' traffics, especially employees and students to their punctual religions. Moreover, pollution is still existing in cities in many types such as air pollution, water pollutions, and so on. Citizens' health will be harmed by toxic air emmissed by transportations and factories in urban areas and the surroundings where we live is dirty day by day.
On the other hand, if governments declare to persuade people to move to regional towns, there will be some bad results. Firstly, for workers who live in towns, it will take a long time for them to go to work. This seems meaningless but it can be a factor to the increase of traffic jams, then lead to a mass of problems in their work-effectiveness. Secondly, with the growth of traffic congestion, vehicle emissions will definitely exacerbate the city atmosphere then heavily cause air and noise pollution. Finally, the difference between two distinguishing areas like cities and towns could not be definitely got familiar by some employees, they can be easily fooled by some tricks when they go to the market.
In conclusion, city dwellers are clearly facing many issues in everyday life. There are still methods to reduce those problems announced by governments but I do not get on the solutions of citizens moving to regional towns.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-08-30 | songuyen14 | 89 | view |
| 2022-06-03 | Mary Nhuy Tran | 78 | view |
| 2022-05-19 | erbol | 73 | view |
| 2022-01-27 | Diyorbek Zaripboyev | 84 | view |
| 2021-11-17 | buiminhduc | 61 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98349834983 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84622421419 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600660066007 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5873988567 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271774596611 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856419163262 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675604941015 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178659940894 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870115554055 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.