People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Large cities are luxuries to stay along with it, People living there have to encounter many offences and barriers in daily activities. In most of the cities pollution and high traffic are the major hinderance, so In my opinion the government should motivate individuals and provide facilities to move in suburbs.
The cities have lots of vehicles, most of the cities in the world have a huge problem regarding traffic management, as well as it produces unwanted materials to the enviroment. It leads to the pollution of the cities, those factor have large effect in day to day activities. Along with this, delay in schedule for job, different airborne as well as water borne diseases are growing. Though its not a problem that arises itself, human itself are developing and suffering. Massive crowd in cities makes people unwell, living in have excessive chance of being depressed. For example, in Delhi most of people are attempting suicide because of their city life and the way of living they prefer, over 300,000,00 population relay in a city also it is too congested .
Though, the city life have lots of problems as well as joy, if the adminstration doesn't push individuals to the rural areas they even cannot manage it well.An effective decisions regarding migration from higher authority helps to balance urban as well as rural population. If people start to live in city than village population density won't be equal with an area. Developing universities, collages, hospitals and all infrastructure can change people mind towards migration also providing extra facilities helps to twist mind about city life. The Regional towns should be more facilitated than cities and some of the attractions should be developed their so that people want to stay.Australia even has changed their policies regarding immigration since last year because of huge population density in cities like Sydney, Canberra, and Melbourne.
In conclusion, In spite of problems like high traffic and pollution people are living in cities because of facilities, Good reform form the government can change people way of living, So improving the facilities towards suburbs town will attract people to stay there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20903954802 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75059424428 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536723163842 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.8765378019 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.846153846 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376098042982 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128491994195 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640292801579 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240976564852 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187579033461 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.