People in many countries are spending less time with their family. What are the reasons, and effects of this?
Nowadays, the more the economy develops, the more hard-working people endeavor. Thereby, in various countries, they lack time with their family. this essay will examine the main cause of having not enough time with family and possible solutions to this problem.
The two main causes of this problem are people are so hectic and the dependence on electronic devices. First of all, they have to finish a tremendous workload, even some of them work unsocial hours. For example, workers who work in a factory must leave home in the early morning àn come back in the late evening. Consequently, they do not have enough time to take care of carefully their children. Secondly, the dependence on technology has aggravated this issue. In today's technology-driven world, smartphones and laptops are indispensable devices for everyone. this leads to face-to-face conservation with family members become decreasing and making a distance from one's.
this alarming situation will make the sentimental value of family become worse and therefore needs drastic measures. For one thing, the government should enact a law about strictly limiting overworking. people are permitted to work only eight hours a day. Another thing is that parents ought to open more conservation with their children to teach and share interesting things in life with them. In addition, they also organize trips regularly during the holiday time to have memorable memories.
In conclusion, a family is an important factor of society and we need to solve problems which relate to family relationships. Shortage of family time is the main problem comes from every member of the family. However, we can stop pursuing fame and fortune and take care of who we love.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, another thing, even so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20143884892 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79452650668 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618705035971 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.3637162044 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231699318637 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680228997428 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570129936389 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151364879182 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592842836515 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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