People nowadays sleep less than they did in the past.
Why is this?
Do you think it is a negative or positive development?
The question regarding duration of sleep has become highly-debatable in social life. The average period of sleep decreased and I believe that this possesses a negative effect on life’s quality.
This phenomenon is explained by different factors. The vast majority of people sleeping less said that this is because of increased workday duration and the other part connected that with modern entertainment, such as computer games. In any event, reduced sleeping time leads to terrible consequences and harms people’s health - mental as well as physical and even can be the main reason for forming cancer cells. According to results of research conducted by WHO (World Health Organization) the continuation of bedtime tangibly decreased for 27% in comparison to previous decade.
Due to research outcomes that I have mentioned above, personally I believe that this problem is a bane for society and requires an immediate solution. In support of my point of view it is impossible not to recall another research held by WHO. but a few years earlier. The research demonstrated that sleeping less can be the main reason for the majority of diseases related to physical health which in turn leads to a downturn of life quality.
This essay sheds light on the main reasons for the phenomenon of decreased duration of bedtime and gives the author's personal opinion on this controversial topic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20535714286 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87993827094 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602678571429 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3118069505 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135924822348 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517293003543 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043115867646 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859272367384 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292647994895 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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