People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
One of the most conspicuous trends in the recent days is the lack of sleeping. This trend has several reasons and a lot of consequences as well. So, this essay will try to cover the main reasons and the impacts.
The first reason why most people are suffering from sleeping is the weakness of economy. Undeniably, your standard of living and your comfort are controlled by your country’s economy. The higher economy the higher level of comfort you can live. We can see that clearly in many countries. Egypt, for example, in the past, when the economy was pretty good then now, the products were cheap and available everywhere so, one job was enough to live a normal life and find adequate time to sleep and entertain. Unlike now the dramatic decrease in economy has bad implications on the individual’s life. The prices went up significantly so that individuals are forced to find more than one job and working extra hours in order to yielding high income to satisfy their needs and that is all will take from their comfort and sleeping hours.
Many health issues can be occurred by the lacking of sleeping. Such as, high blood pressure, diabetes. one’s traits can be changed as well if he was a kind person sometimes you may find him in a bad tempered and that affects on the people around him.
As shown above, your sleeping and comfortable are mainly associated with the economy and your sleeping hours can cause many impacts either on your health or your mood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, then, well, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71317829457 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48966374745 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6152553709 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8571428571 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128679323676 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425903080751 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042891217346 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717465824708 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240106860727 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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