People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
Nowadays, most of the people sleep less than they used to in the past. This essay will discuss the main reasons of this epidemic and then the possible effects on the individuals and the other people surrounding him.
In my opinion, this problem generated from the nature of some jobs and the mentality of most of the people. Some jobs require to be awake most of the time as Police officers and any emergency jobs. People these days tends to play as much they can and they don’t care about their health. For example, a lot of people stay all the knight playing video games or watching movies instead of sleeping to regain their physical power and their mental power too.
The possible effects of this problem include physical health problems and mental health witch will affects the productivity of those people. First of all, when someone sleeps less than seven to eight hours in the knight, this will cause to him a lot of physical problems like headache or he wont be able to do hard jobs and work for a long time, because he needs to sleep well. Which will affects the other people surrounding him too. Secondly, this person who sleep less than seven to eight hours in the knight he will lose his focus a lot, which will make him zone out constantly.
In conclusion, less sleeping is a serious problem that a lot of people suffer from it. It’s mainly caused by the mentality of the nature of humans these days and effects the productivity and the health of these people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'affect'.
Suggestion: affect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57894736842 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21229022764 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503759398496 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5920161372 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246184904331 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107739628886 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994392086924 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185467331565 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120597824512 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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