As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of human think for themselves will surely deteriorate?
to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, as the development happen in the area of science and technology. More and more people are depending on technology to sum up their problem. there is deny of that machines are better way to for us find a solution of problem but in the end it will be decline thought process of human being. As my point of view, it has negative effects for human beings.
To begin with, overuse of technology is degrading the process of thought making ability because of these smart devices. For example; a high school student cannot perform a basic calculation without a calculator. Few years age, travelers use handmade maps with their skills to find out location and currently they fully rely on Gps devices.
Moreover, it’s also taking over our social skill by introducing the social website. For example, a indolence students makes his friends over social media platform but he/she will never learn about social skill due to a lack of face to face conversation. Moreover, spending long hours over the social media platform will leads them live alone which might cost them a lost of handful skill.
To end up, we have to overcome use of machine in the thought making process. It’s invited for us to perform some difficult inefficiency for not lose abilities.
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| 2019-09-27 | Gagan Cheema | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ce and technology. More and more people are depending on technology to sum up their problem. ...
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Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... on technology to sum up their problem. there is deny of that machines are better way...
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Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'denied'.
Suggestion: denied
...ology to sum up their problem. there is deny of that machines are better way to for ...
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Line 9, column 103, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ducing the social website. For example, a indolence students makes his friends ov...
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Line 9, column 326, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...urs over the social media platform will leads them live alone which might cost them a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95813953488 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5697832263 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655813953488 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8354483244 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148282718616 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543957653849 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627759226571 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870512824284 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678963350254 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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