Nowadays, it is becomes most debates topic among the colleges admintration. Which started by getting the name simple introduction and ends with a humiliation by senior students. Therefore, Some institutions talking about to end this one out.
To begin with, let analyze where ragging come from term. firstly , its tradition form of to give a warm welcome to newcomers and get information and introduction from them in loving and funning way by junior once also neither the involvements of revenge, defamation and dominance oven the other. Secondly it’s a place where students build up their carriers so they enter their with dreams, expectations for a better future. but ragging will discomfort them as a result of depressed personality.
Probing further, every day we hear a lot of news in media platform as well as in the papers about the suicide, mental breakdown of junior pupils who was victimized by ragging. These are those people who’s never overcomes the hurt of odd attitude which was given by seniors students. I personally fell that seniors should understand the negative effects of these activities which spoil a good college environment and a juniors mind and the government have to banned these activities in universities.
To sum up, I would like to say that ragging is not matter of pride it’s a black spot on our education system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: debates'; debate's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, talking about, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86624975435 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.709821428571 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2495771858 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.727272727 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0573080861208 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232732260293 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.018572571696 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0329003106173 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0068173844858 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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