Nowadays, the use of mobile phone in public places should be banned and it becomes a debatable topic. However, la large portion of the society thinks this stop use is an necessary step to take but other counter that its curial part of persons life. In my point of view i am partially agree with this statement.
To begin with, lets analyze some important points why should use of cell phones banned in public area. Firstly, gadgets makes an unusual noise in public place like library where the most people went to read some knowledgeable book with concentration but an unusual nose of messages or calls were interrupt them to do so. Secondly, it will create antisocial habit among the mobs. For example, molls or shops usually build to serve people but instead of getting services they usually busy to texting each other. Last but not least, phones can spoil the movements of enjoying some good music or acts.
On the other hand, as far as my knowledge is concern there few situation where a person need their mobile phone. Firstly, Mobile phones are multi functional device that people can use in different states like in emergency. For example, accident in public place mobs can easily call to hospital for an urgent help. Secondly, it can provide a safety to youngsters as they can easily communicate with their family. For Example, in this modern world youngster lives far away from their home towns for their further studies and work for better future . Last but not least, Cell devices are good way to connect with the source of entertainment. While traveling people can easily entrain themselves.
To sum up, I would like to say that mobile phone should be banned in these where it interrupt others like library, bank, But in all other places it should b allowed to use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... of the society thinks this stop use is an necessary step to take but other counte...
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Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rt of persons life. In my point of view i am partially agree with this statement....
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Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ife. In my point of view i am partially agree with this statement. To begin with,...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'interrupted'.
Suggestion: interrupted
... unusual nose of messages or calls were interrupt them to do so. Secondly, it will create...
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun situation seems to be countable; consider using: 'few situations'.
Suggestion: few situations
...as far as my knowledge is concern there few situation where a person need their mobile phone....
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Line 5, column 546, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rther studies and work for better future . Last but not least, Cell devices are go...
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Line 5, column 640, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nnect with the source of entertainment. While traveling people can easily entrain the...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interrupts'?
Suggestion: interrupts
...hone should be banned in these where it interrupt others like library, bank, But in all o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78640776699 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35666080633 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598705501618 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.624014628 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266781060335 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839834217816 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934423933085 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172138715017 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510940033333 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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