Nowadays, sudden incensement in the population becomes a major issue for developing and developed nations. Overpopulation causes a tremendous number of problems to country that I am going to discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, lets analyze some major causes happen by overpopulation. Firstly, it is be hard for people to find out relevant jobs in their areas and face heavy competition. Secondly, there is be a less chances for families to provide proper education to their children. Thirdly, people get fewer chances to full their needs due to a high unemployment’s rates.
Probing Further, it can be tough for the governments to provide help in the public sectors n some major cities. Last but not least, there will be high chances of incensement in the crimes because most of people are unemployed. Drug abuse and snatching robberies are few that can be face by local people.
However, there are few ways that can help the government to out from this situation. Firstly, the government should educate mobs about the size of families. Like, in there was complaining starts by the name of "we two we have two". Which mainly focus to aware the people about overpopulation.
To sum up, I would like to say that overpopulation is a major issue for many federal governments. Therefore, the consequences of it might be high number of deaths due to the hunger and life will be hard in big cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...appen by overpopulation. Firstly, it is be hard for people to find out relevant jo...
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Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...e heavy competition. Secondly, there is be a less chances for families to provide ...
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Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...vy competition. Secondly, there is be a less chances for families to provide proper ...
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Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'chance'?
Suggestion: chance
...mpetition. Secondly, there is be a less chances for families to provide proper educatio...
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Line 2, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ue to a high unemployment's rates. Probing Further, it can be tough for the...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...es of incensement in the crimes because most of people are unemployed. Drug abuse and snatchin...
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Line 4, column 243, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...name of 'we two we have two'. Which mainly focus to aware the people about ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96234309623 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01702944857 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581589958159 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.7150281462 49.4020404114 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.0666666667 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131167566068 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436679451484 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493272920898 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799219582989 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680760941712 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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