People’s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors. Do you agree or disagree?
There is one of the widely-spread points of view that individuals tend to be more dependent on the age of their purchasing patterns. However, it might be other conditions, which influence their customers’ behavior and this essay will shed some light on them.
Admittedly, it could be true that adolescences appear to buy things more often than the elderly, especially in the case of such areas as devices and clothes. Nevertheless, on closer inspection, this statement is broken on the statistics of the countries with high and low incomes. Moreover, the minimalist lifestyle and zero waste conception gain popularity among people, so, they prefer to consume less.
Turning to the possible alternatives, perhaps, the major factor that has a great impact on human consumerism is finances. Rich people are likely to invest more money in buying due to the reason that they could afford it compared with poor citizens. This is more a question of their needs than the necessity of performing the image and status. Another side may be in the field of mentality and referring to addiction that called shopaholism. These consumers devote all their leisure time to shopping and the scientific researches showed the evidence that it does not relate to gender or age, meaning that every person could be suffering from this illness.
Summarize mentioned above, it is logical to conclude that aging periods are not so essential in people’s consuming conduct, whereas there are more integral parts, which are responsible for the desire of the humans to buy.
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a question' or simply 'questions'?
Suggestion: a question; questions
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Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...This is mot a questions of their needs, than the necessarity of performing the image...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15625 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84227941028 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65234375 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0947303131 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156442572305 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050053468189 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391645474183 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910043875352 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215886001628 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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