People say that a country will benefit greatly if its students study abroad.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely said that students studying overseas will do their home countries a great service. From my perspective, while I concur with with this viewpoint, I also believe that there are some potential problems resulting from this.
On the one hand, it is advantageous to have students graduating from foreign university. One of the foremost justification is that a country will stand a better chance of having more well-qualified employees. This is because talented students can not only hone practical skills, life experience, but also have deeper insights into their current fields while studying abroad, and hence leading to the growth in workplace.
On the other hand, I am of the view that overseas studying can bring some drawbacks to a nation. With regards to the aforementioned benefit, it could happen in theory; however, in practice most students have a tendency to settle in their studying countries after graduation on account of their inclination towards better living conditions, high paid jobs security, and so on. Secondly, in terms of the Third World, these nations may suffer from budget deficit because governments have to allocate money in order to grant these scholars in many aspects of life such as: annual tuition fee, accomodation, etc. Thus, this can result in the imbalance in national expenditures, and hence causing economic crisis.
In conclusion, although it is undeniable that every nation is beneficial if it has many graduates in oversea schools, the advantages are likely to pale in comparison with the disadvantages.
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Suggestion: with
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28915662651 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92509565274 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630522088353 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4620818776 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.7 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140627891508 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615009597759 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808020313787 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824320851802 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553522925603 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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