people ought to adhere to the culture of a foreign nation, once they have migrated. I completely agree that, that migrants need to value the norms of a country in order to show respect and preserve their culture in that regard.
There are numerous reasons why I think that foreigners get accustomed culturally when journeyed abroad. Firstly, Following the way of life on a foreign land exhibits sense of recognition and a larger extent, a form of appreciation to the inhabitants. More precisely, individuals relatively blending in the culture is likely to prevent any form of potential disputes among migrants. For instance, in the Arabian countries, females are obliged to clothe themselves up fully, only exposing their eyes. Thus, females moving to such areas ought to embrace such form of dressing as contrary clothing to that leads to a huge fine and shows disrespect to culture.
Another point worth considering is that, people adapting to culture of other countries make them cherish such traditions. By default, we all have varied lifestyles depending on the area one hails from, however, for people to be glued significantly to that of other country shows respect and acceptance. Take for example, moving to an Asian country such as China, one is supposed to feed with chop sticks as opposed to the regular cutlery sets used in most nations. More so, having to lean a new language of a particular country is highly essential in building stronger bond in the aspect of communication. Eventually, it will be seen that the customs are being considered.
In conclusion, I think that foreigners moving to a different country need to get used to the norms in order to show recognition and preservation of culture.
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 78
- Modern technology allows machines to perform the hard work instead of humans Does this have a positive or a negative effect on people Give your own opinion and examples 81
- The pie charts and table give information about the total value sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000. 78
- The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- With the rise of ebooks comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good forward step while others do not. What are advantages and disadvantages of this trend? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
people ought to adhere to the culture of a for...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03496503497 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8456727141 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583916083916 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1814692352 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0872684237212 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030885453243 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278913340132 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0463618713054 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030127303125 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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