People should not eat meat. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, eating meat is a general thing for most people, and they can obtain meat from supermarket easily. Some people believe that meat is not necessary for humans, because people can get the nutrition from other methods. Therefore, this essay will show that people should not eat meat, because it is negative for environment if people continue eating meat.
Firstly, it is helpful for decreasing pollution if people do not eat meat. The places for keeping animals are usually very huge and released a lot of waste which pollute rivers. Moreover, people also need to offer food for animals, which means humans need to grow more crops which create more pollution.
On the other hand, eating animals can cause some species to become threatened. Humans are not limited to eating any kind of animals. In some countries, people like to eat rare animals and this makes the animals become endangered. In addition, people kill too many animals which are usually other animals’ food. This also makes some animals become endangered.
In general, people should stop eating meat, because it can cause pollution and make animals becoming endangered. However, it is very difficult to make people stop to eat meat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in general, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12060301508 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39502991183 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527638190955 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.0 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6329421857 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.3846153846 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303216485156 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136142960639 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111881221915 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208508884843 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940985082833 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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