People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effects does it have on an individual and society?
These days, sleeping pattern changed to a great extent in previous few years. People sleep less than required standard time for a sound sleep in this modern era as compared to earlier period. There are several reasons for this changed sleeping pattern and it has many effects on people and society which are further described in the paragraph.
To start with, the major cause of altered sleep pattern is stress. In this fast pace world, an individual has to achieve success in the desired profession to live a better life. Therefore, a person have to pursue good education and find an occupation or set up a business. While endeavouring to accomplish these goals an individual deals with a lot of stress that leads to insomnia. The second cause of this problem is advancement in technology. Nowadays, there are ample of gadgets which attracts almost all the groups. These devices contain many applications that can indulge a person for 24 hours. Moreover, internet also contributes to this problem as it is the source of entertainment and people use it before going to bed on their mobile phones and waste their sleeping time.
Furthermore, sleeping less than 7 hours can cause various health issues. Scientists have proven that less sleep can lead to neurological problems such as demensia and amnesia. In addition, if a person have not slept enough he will feel tired and irritable for the day. Sleeping less also have bad impacts on society. If a person is sleepless, he can potentially be irritable or may have bad temper, this will make him unsociable. Moreover, children can imitate him and show ill behavior in the society.
To conclude, having less sleep than normal has become common in this era. However, this has many negative effects on individual and society. Thus, masses should maintain a healthy lifestyle by eating and sleeping well so that they can become a good example for the next generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ind an occupation or set up a business. While endeavouring to accomplish these goals ...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o neurological problems such as demensia and amnesia. In addition, if a person ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, in addition, such as, to start with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95356037152 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61854722683 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569659442724 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5029229455 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.15 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352129599223 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103275481824 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878625398488 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218609784495 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565913139197 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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