The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.
Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.
The increase of the ratio of overweight children in western society by a fifth has become a dilemma in the last ten years. This essay will discuss the causes and effects of this problem.
Obesity has a plethora of causes. First of all, everybody cannot follow an unique diet system, cannot calculate the calories that he needs in his daily routine, cannot know his BMR so he cannot know how he will burn calories in one day. Consequently, at past a lot of children ate a lot of junk foods, sugars (candies, sweets), food that contains excess of cholesterol, salt, fried food. But now if any child had a choice, he would choose healthy life style to keep fit. In addition, many toddlers do not participate in any sports or go to the gym. For example, a survey has shown that 68% of people eat junk food on a daily basis.
However, there is an adverse impact of leading this unhealthy conduct. Primarily, it results in a variety of diseases like cardiovascular disease such as Myocardial infarction, high blood pressure and Diabetes (diabetes mellitus and diabetes insipidus). For example
, in the US more than 60% of people are dying due to heart-related disease mainly because of poor lifestyle. Moreover, obesity can affect our generation too. Fat people tend to produce more stress-induced hormones called cortisol. Furthermore, this leads to memory loss.
To put in a nutshell, it can be finally commented that consuming unhealthy diets like fast food and pre-prepared meals has a bad effect on the body system. So, we should make it a duty to be conscious with what the growing child eats and homemade food from natural resources will be of great help.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...urthermore, this leads to memory loss. To put in a nutshell, it can be finally ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81468531469 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70239104492 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667832167832 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.878876729 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132057397224 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465074020704 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955665685816 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105909161468 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17699182485 0.056905535591 311% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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